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     <h2 id="what"><a href="#what">What?</a></h2>
-    <p>Deconference is the first conference organized by <a href="https://dmz.rs">the Decentrala</a>, a Belgrade hackerspace. The Deconference is conceived to be a platform for people to present and discuss ideas about decentralization in any sense of that word.</p>
+    <p>Deconference is the inaugural conference organized by <a href="https://dmz.rs">Decentrala</a>, a Belgrade hackerspace. It serves as a platform for individuals to present and discuss ideas related to decentralization in all its forms.</p>
     
-    <p>If you ask us what <em>decentralization</em> is, we can't answer that. There is no Central Committee of Decentralization, that would define this process. Therefore, we would like to hear from you what you consider under this term.</p>
+    <p>If you ask us what <em>decentralization</em> means, we can't provide a definitive answer. We would like to hear from you what you consider under this term.</p>
     
     <h2 id="wwhen-and-where"><a href="#when-and-where">When & Where?</a></h2>
-    <p>The Deconforence will be held the whole day on Sunday 15. September 2024, in Cultural Centar Magacin located in <a href="https://osm.org/go/xf3Fz31te?node=1226456745">Kraljevića Marka 4-8, Belgrade</a>. The day before, the social party will be hosted in the <a href="https://dckrov.rs/">Community center Krov</a> located in <a href="https://osm.org/go/xf3HQQdIH">Kraljice Marije 47, Belgrade</a>.</p>
+    <p>Deconference will take place all day on Sunday, September 15, 2024, at Cultural Center Magacin, located at <a href="https://osm.org/go/xf3Fz31te?node=1226456745">Kraljevića Marka 4-8, Belgrade</a>. The evening prior, a social gathering will be hosted at <a href="https://dckrov.rs/">Community Center Krov</a>, located at  <a href="https://osm.org/go/xf3HQQdIH">Kraljice Marije 47, Belgrade</a>.</p>
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     <h2 id="why"><a href="#why">Why?</a></h2>
 
-    <p>The Decentrala was created by a small group of enthusiasts gathered about the idea of technological decentralization. In the last year and a half, we organized more than 160 events: lectures, workshops, discussions,  hackathons... with which we tried to democratize technological knowledge and educate people about privacy, open source, right to repair (and how to repair), digital assets, usage rights... Since day zero, we never wanted to force opinions on individuals, instead, we wanted to give them a chance to be informed of alternatives and make a choice for themselves.</p>
+    <p>Decentrala was founded by a small group of enthusiasts united by the idea of technological decentralization. Over the past year and a half, we've organized over 160 events—lectures, workshops, discussions, hackathons—aimed at democratizing technological knowledge and educating people about privacy, open source principles, the right to repair (and how to repair), digital assets, and usage rights. Since day one, our approach has been to inform individuals about alternatives rather than impose opinions upon them.</p>
 
-    <p>We had the pleasure to chat with many visitors, many of them with backgrounds unrelated to technology. In our events and discussions with these interesting people, we realised that the idea of decentralization is much bigger than just "open technology". Many of today's activists and their organizations are fighting for some kind of decentralization.  Therefore, we would like to hear stories about decentralization from different perspectives.</p>
+    <p>Through engaging with diverse visitors, many from non-technical backgrounds, we've come to realize that decentralization encompasses more than just "open technology." Many activists and organizations today advocate for various forms of decentralization. Therefore, we welcome stories about decentralization from diverse perspectives.</p>
 
     <h2 id="who"><a href="#who">Who?</a></h2>
 
-    <p>Deconference is open platform for evryone who want to talk/demonstarte/discuss about decentralization. You can register your event on mail <a href="mailto:dekonferencija@dmz.rs">dekonferencija@dmz.rs</a> until the very day of the Deconference (15. September)</p>
+    <p>Deconference is an open platform for anyone interested in discussing, demonstrating, or exploring decentralization. You can register your event by emailing<a href="mailto:dekonferencija@dmz.rs">dekonferencija@dmz.rs</a> up until the day of the Deconference (September 15).</p>
 
-    <p>We will populate this section as we confirm topics.</p>
+    <p>We will update this section as topics are confirmed.</p>
 
     <h2 id="how"><a href="#how">How?</a></h2>
 
-    <p>The Deconference is financed by the private assets of organisers. Deconference, like any other Decentrala's work, is completely free for any visitor. Deconference can't pay any grants to lecturers/presenters.</p>
+    <p>The Deconference is funded by the organizers' private assets. Like all of Decentrala's activities, Deconference is free for all attendees. Unfortunately, we are unable to provide grants to lecturers or presenters.</p>
 
-    <p>The Decentrala accepts donations only from individuals.</p>
+    <p>Decentrala accepts donations exclusively from individuals.</p>
 
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